Talk:Rag-noth/@comment-4678330-20120128180947

This page is beginning to look good! A few things need to be changed, however.

Timeline: Cradle is the baseline for this wiki, so in the future, there is no need to specify "Cradian Years" unless you were referring to an alien planet.

Grammar: Remember, Cradle is a proper noun! Capitalize it (and be sure to proofread for other mistakes)!

Biology: Humans have about a 180 degree field of vision, so what is the point of the third eye? Does it offer any benefits?

Image: Not everyone is an artist, but try to create some summation of your race so others have an idea of what you are imagining!